SevinNyne

I’m reviewing Yaela’s blog which is called “Never ever ever give up!”. There are 9 interesting posts and all of them caught my attention. She did a really good job, but she needs to improve the order of the sentences. I’m not saying that everything is wrong, but Yaela needs to focus in what she is doing. She did a very good job and I know Yaela is improving her English. I think the best way to improve that is studying and paying attention in what we are doing. If you see her blog, you can realize that the first one has some mistakes and the last one has just few mistakes, and that’s mean she studied and she improved her writing.

My favorite post is about Chileans. I could realize that she is very patriotic. Sometimes young people do not feel identify with our country, national song or our flag, but Yaela is very interested on our tradition, especially in our national dance.

I like the order of her blog. Everything is in order and you know where you are. It is not a messy blog and the color she uses is a technique to catch you attention.

The most important think she could improve is about the structure of the sentences and the way she uses verb to be. She forgets to put “is” in some sentences, but it could be a typing mistake too.

To finish, I have to say that Yaela has done a very good job during the semester. She has put effort to improve and to get good marks.